Okay, here I want to intrudution about My name my fulname is Elias duyala my friends usually call me Ely. I came from pegunungan Bintang and my cuntry is papua.Than about my family are I have two youg sister and one brother. They are life in papua .
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I thinK you can develop this paragraph become more than one paragraph. . . .^^
BalasHapusElly, you must pay attention on your spelling and punctuation, for example:introdution, cuntry, youg. Look again in your first sentence. It must be great if you wrote:"Here I want to introduce myself. My name is Elias Duyala, but my friends usually call me Elly. bla bla bla ....
BalasHapusYou also can not forget the grammar. hmm, just keep on learning. Happy writing!
Elia..hm, i think you have to try more exercise because i saw a lot of mistakes in your article.
BalasHapusEly, be careful with the tenses and don't forget to use the articles
BalasHapusEly, I think when you want to write a past event you have to use simple past. Don't use simple present. Be careful!
BalasHapuseli,,mind the spelling..
BalasHapuskeep on trying..
ok.........thank you friends for suggest to me
BalasHapus