Description my favourite Lecturer
Hi..........friends now I wanted to tell you about the lecturer that most I liked or was happy our time the last semester. Well here I will depict to you because she was a mother of the lecturer.
Friends of this lecturer I was very happy at the time of us the semester one last year because of this lecturer the funniest lecturer so as we also smile, and laughed and all of the students class c with the spirit learned, then the way tougth the of this lecturer I was happy because tougth her not focused to the lesson or subject but while played just tougth to us cause very good.
But also this the behaviour or the characteristics of a mother of the lecturer I would try depicted him was a mother of the lecturer she has a fat body, she is not wear glasses and afterwards her steel round, ratherhair somewhat long and black hair had whiteskin.
Ok thank you so much for read my article .
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Hi..........friends now I wanted to tell you about the lecturer that most I liked or was happy our time the last semester. Well here I will depict to you because she was a mother of the lecturer.
Friends of this lecturer I was very happy at the time of us the semester one last year because of this lecturer the funniest lecturer so as we also smile, and laughed and all of the students class c with the spirit learned, then the way tougth the of this lecturer I was happy because tougth her not focused to the lesson or subject but while played just tougth to us cause very good.
But also this the behaviour or the characteristics of a mother of the lecturer I would try depicted him was a mother of the lecturer she has a fat body, she is not wear glasses and afterwards her steel round, ratherhair somewhat long and black hair had whiteskin.
Ok thank you so much for read my article .
friends.. suggested criticism inserted
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hi friend I think you should change more clear the letter.
BalasHapusnot too clear. . .
BalasHapuseliiii be careful182x with your grammar and spelling...
BalasHapuselii..
BalasHapuspay attention on your subject verb agreement!!
elli, you should use the correct grammar in your writing. There're many mistakes especially in grammatical, e.g: the first sentence Hi..........friends now I wanted to tell you about the lecturer that most I liked or was happy our time the last semester. now is present, so you can't use wanted you should use want . And check this clause that most I liked or was happy , what was happy means?
BalasHapushe elii, it hard to read your post.
BalasHapusplease change the format :)
by the way you have effort to write, that's great.
but always be careful with your grammar :)
now I wanted to tell ===> now, i want to tell...
BalasHapusabout the lecturer that most I liked or was happy our time the last semester
===>> about the lecture that i like the most in last semester.
Eli, please try to write more clearly because we, especially me, get confuse...
But, it's ok.. we need process...
sorry... but i didn't get any idea about who the person is...
BalasHapusmaybe you can try to make it clear later..
good luck..