Narrative Future Plan

Over my lifetime I would like to achieve many things but there is only one main things I Would like to accomplish these being : to become a profesional teacher. If I graduate from english language education study program in Sanata Dharma. To become teacher it's my dream, in my counrty or village is moreless teacher, so to become a teacher I would need four or five years study hard of Sanata Dharma University or English Education to attain and a master degree of internship and a profesional teacher.
I will accomplish this by working Since I get a lot of questions related to my future plans, I’ll go ahead and share them. For people or for my village Papua who know me well, this certainly isn’t a secret, but others may find some of it surprising.
. However,this year I intend to begin building a profesional teacher, most likely starting with a headmaster in Junior High School it's my future plans if my score in english language education study program is well in Sanata Dharma And focus on my task at hard .By becoming a teacher and a successful I know I can achieve my dream of retiring in Pegunungan Bintang Papua. The last things I would like to achieve would be to retire to Papua like my youngparents, and it's this dream which will drive the ambition I need to focus on doing well in school in order to achieve the first to talking it one step at a time .I know I will do my best to accomplish all of these tasks. I will also try to be a hard working in my village because there are no english teacher. To do this I will have to have a make a good living for my familly. Another thing I would like to accomplish in my life is to become a succcessful busnissman and make a good living for my familly I would like to become a teacher because I love my children and in my village is no english teacher so I study here enlish education if God blessing me and graduate I will do it and successful in my village.
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